“Rumbling” (Haiku)

lightning thunderstorm GIF by davestrick

“Rumbling”

(Haiku)

 

rumbling thunderstorms

streaks of lightning brighten skies,

drenching fresh-cut grass.

 

BC 2019

Picture Credit: Giphy

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      1. Yes l think l cracked it with my very last comment πŸ™‚ Thank you.

        I understand it, now l will be thinking syllables all night, but l don’t think l could get it right, because l am too damn verbose πŸ™‚

        But you handle it wonderfully πŸ™‚

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      1. No, l wasn’t messing it, it’s how l think l was sitting here with my hand under my chin counting syllables – running your Haiku over and over and counting, then realised it wasn’t the letters idiot [as in me] it is the words Rum Bling [2] lol!

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  1. Panic not Beckie, you can delete all these comments πŸ™‚ I just had to touch base again with my schooling πŸ™‚

    Rum Bling Thun der storms that’s it isn’t it ? πŸ™‚

    I am fascinated with Haiku, just never understood it properly so making a short verse an image of sorts πŸ™‚

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