“Rumbling”
(Haiku)
rumbling thunderstorms
streaks of lightning brighten skies,
drenching fresh-cut grass.
BC 2019
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“Rumbling” (Haiku)
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Lovely!
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Thank you, Sadje! ⛈
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You’re welcome 😉
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😍👑😘👏
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Thanks, Angie! 😉
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You really do have a gift with haiku!👑
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I wouldn’t go that far, but thank you kindly for the compliment! 😘
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That’s very nice Beckie,
but l just still don’t get Haiku – what is it
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5-7-5 syllables per line = 3 lines.
Re-read my haiku, and count the syllables while reading it. You’ll understand it then.
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So if you broke that down into just the syllables themselves how would you write that right now?
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Example line 1 = 5 syllables
line 2 = 7
line 3 = 5
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bewitched by young eyes = 5
twinkling blue under lashes = 7
match that of the sky = 5
be-witched = 2 syllables by =1 young =1 eyes = 1 total = 5
Understand now?
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Yes l think l cracked it with my very last comment 🙂 Thank you.
I understand it, now l will be thinking syllables all night, but l don’t think l could get it right, because l am too damn verbose 🙂
But you handle it wonderfully 🙂
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It’s takes a little practice, but you’ll be able to pull it off. I have faith in you!
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Uhuh lol, l will give it a bash in private, put my hand under my chin counting wise lmao, then once that’s secured, try and think of something to write 🙂
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Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry usually based on nature. Google it, the explanation might be clearer if you read that. That’s sort of how I learned it. 🤗
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I was reading some whilst counting syllables, it would make a very good comical sketch l feel, that dumb [1] look [1] on 1 my 1 face, 1 was mor on ic [3] or rather mo ron ic
ha ha 🙂
Mor on is 2 lol: )
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look =1 on = 1 my =1 face= 1 was = 1 mor-on-ic = 3 You’ve hit 8 in your first line.
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1 too many or 3 too many, will have to work on it see 🙂
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3 too many. LOL!
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I don’t mean 5, 7, 5 l mean if you were to write the letters themselves that made that 5,7,5 what would you write?
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I’m not quite understanding you now? Random 5 letters?
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I am guessing it would be what u,i,u ,e, o is that right?
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Are you now messing with me? u.i.u.e.o.????? How about b-i-n-g-o??? “And Bingo was his name OH!”
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No, l wasn’t messing it, it’s how l think l was sitting here with my hand under my chin counting syllables – running your Haiku over and over and counting, then realised it wasn’t the letters idiot [as in me] it is the words Rum Bling [2] lol!
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LOL! Heck, I even count with my fingers while writing them too. Nothing wrong with that. I do it all the time.
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Panic not Beckie, you can delete all these comments 🙂 I just had to touch base again with my schooling 🙂
Rum Bling Thun der storms that’s it isn’t it ? 🙂
I am fascinated with Haiku, just never understood it properly so making a short verse an image of sorts 🙂
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Right. Rum-bling thun-der-storms = 5.
You’re getting it! 🤗
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Yes, l got it in the end, as said l was cussing my idiocy with the letters 🙂
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Good! Check out Sur Vincents “Daily Echo” midnight haiku… She writes really good ones, especially her recent one. Hillarious!
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Will do, many thanks 🙂
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You’re very welcome. Anytime! 😉
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Awesome
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Wondrously done Beckie ..xx
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Thank you, Ivor. You’re always so kind. xoxox!!!
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My lady made me kind xx
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Aww! 💗
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awesome haiku becky! ❤
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Thank you, Dear! Mucho apreciated! xoxo!
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